posted by [identity profile] miranda-skye.livejournal.com at 07:11pm on 15/04/2009


You made me like Felipe fic and I hate you :p

Not betaed, you say? This is awesome. You win at writing 2nd person POV and there are some fantastic turns of phrase in this, like this:

During nights such as this one, you feel as if you could take him apart only to put him together again, piece by infinitessimal piece. Under the moonlight, he seems made of silvery liquid, yours to mould as you wish.

I love the way you write their relationship - it feels very real between them and I always prefer it when wives aren't just ignored :p

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